I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, 18 May 2021
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Kia ora Olivia! Its Clara from Paroa School. I definitely didn't know how far some of the planets were from earth! Thanks for telling me. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteHello Olivia! I'm Lucy from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis post looks really cool and I like how you included photos! To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could add a description about why you did this.
Lucy
Hey Olivia Im Zoe I like your cause you added images keep up good work
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia, Great work I love your work
ReplyDeleteHi Olivia, I'm Miro G from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting blog. Maybe nest time you could add a description!
Miro G
Hi Olivia, My name is Grace and I go to Paroa school! This is very interesting post and I did learn some new facts about planets. To be BTB (better than before) you could add a description on why you had to do this what you enjoyed and what you found challenging. Other than that this is very good!
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