Wednesday, 5 August 2020
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Hi Olivia its Leo. I LOVE your writing piece. its energising and calm at the same time!! i want to read more! It would be perfect but nothing ever is. Can't wait to read more from your blog!
ReplyDeleteLeo
Kia ora my name is Robert and I am a year 7 at Paihia School. I loved your writing it is one of the best pieces I have ever read. I loved that you did not state some of what was written directly in the text. Our class is doing that in our T shape.
ReplyDeleteDo you enjoy writing?