I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Olivia, my name is Mihipeka and I am a year 8 student that attends Paihia School. I really like your blog post. I like the pictures you chose to post on your blog. I also appreciate your post because I would like to go to Canada sometime in the future. Your post reminded me of when I was in lockdown and when I had to learn about Canada. Do you like Canada?
Awesome work Olivia! The only one of these attractions I knew of was Horseshoe Falls. I would love to visit these places if I went to Canada. What place would you like to visit the most?
Hello there Olivia, my name is Mark a year 7 student form Paihia School. I really liked reading your blog post about Canada because I liked the picture you chose for your blog. I also liked your post because I would really like to go to Canada sometime in the future because Canada is my favourite country. Do you want to go to Canada?
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Kia ora Olivia, my name is Mihipeka and I am a year 8 student that attends Paihia School. I really like your blog post. I like the pictures you chose to post on your blog. I also appreciate your post because I would like to go to Canada sometime in the future. Your post reminded me of when I was in lockdown and when I had to learn about Canada. Do you like Canada?
ReplyDeleteAwesome work Olivia! The only one of these attractions I knew of was Horseshoe Falls. I would love to visit these places if I went to Canada. What place would you like to visit the most?
ReplyDeleteHello there Olivia, my name is Mark a year 7 student form Paihia School. I really liked reading your blog post about Canada because I liked the picture you chose for your blog. I also liked your post because I would really like to go to Canada sometime in the future because Canada is my favourite country.
ReplyDeleteDo you want to go to Canada?